Is this a good poem so far?

I, honestly, loved this poem. I normally expect poems on Answers to suck but... Yours surprised me. It's got a normal meter (besides a few lines where it actually adds an effect) and it uses allusions, symbols, and motifs. I think whoever the woman in it is should be flattered, I wish someone'd write a poem like that for me. It's beautiful. =) And I'm not one to say that about much.